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Well the flames above immo are cut. also flames do not go well with gray. and the BK colour is not fitting the rest of the colours.
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Yea, there is a weird straight edge above the "IMMO", it looks like a top of a slightly transparent image. And I'm not really fond of that font for any use other than for "BK", it has a splatter effect in and it really doesn't coincide with a flame effect very well. But the rest of the rendering effects, color scheme, and blending seems to be spot on, nice work.
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yeah... the writing seems to orange. sorry for being harsh- you wanted to know what could be wrong
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I like the red one with the guy with the flame thrower
Thanks,
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I agree. It was the best one yet.
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well. the flamethrower one had a bit of the originality factor which made it better
the thing you wanna do is to step away from your style, I'm not saying it's bad, it's good, but after seeing 4 similar signatures they get blured together- getting boring somehow. I like your work, but next time try to do something different.
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well look. it;s not nice, cause it's basicly 5 minute thing but it somehow presents your way of doing things:
(no time for better bg and I did it from memory so the bk size and placement is off)
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anyway, I still likez it. I think it kinda fits my name better then the last one. I'll definetely do some more work on it though.
